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I just posted an excerpt from the book I’m working on...again, over on the Words blog.

I’d love any feedback you have, especially stuff that needs fixing.

Thanks.

Oops guess I should have posted my huge long post in here instead of on there. I don’t pay attention at all have you noticed?

(now that I am working on something faster than dial up I can easily check the Board again!)

I liked the story. I am glad that you decided to not worry about the length of the stories, because they don’t have to be long to be effective (although I completely understand the perfectionist impulses, because I am like that too ). You should not spend your time worrying about the length of the stories, because I and the other readers will like the book no matter what; we are reading it more to hear your thoughts and ideas than we are reading it to judge each chapter’s length.

I agree.  I think it’s really visual and I can see her pacing down the classroom!!!  Is she completely made up, or does she relate to someone you used to know?  I’m having a bit of “writer’s block” at the moment and I find your website very inspirational.  Keep up the good work Shaun!!

Lisa,

What kind of writing do you do? 

nancy

Oh, she’s for real.  I have a gig in my hometown on Valentine’s day.  Maybe I should go pay her a visit.

Lisa, what do you write?

Nothin published (yet!!!!) but I work on children’s books.  Have you done anything else on your book Shaun? Cause I’d like to read some more.